scribble_002 Fish Maiden

Tried this for skin practice. The hook maiden stuff I've seen floating around got to me.

A lot of the problems from the previous submission can be said the same for this one when describing lines (new one is general uncleanliness), anatomy + perspective (especially that fucking popsicle holding hand), and overall appeal. It can also be said that the shading is inconsistent with where highlights are being placed. If there are more problems that I'm not seeing, feel free to tell me what I missed as I can use more critique and direction to know where to get better.

Sorry it's not Yuko like I said I'd do. I have a large psd document I've been working on and off since September with all the lineart, I'm still ironing out problem regions so it looks right. Shit-job and working on an old friend's project has also been diverting time and energy /blog